I’m plowing through Grey Matters (the second Dulcie Schwartz mystery, sequel to Shades of Grey, at least, if my editor accepts it!) and feeling a bit pressured. Yes, Shades of Grey doesn’t come out in this country till September, but still … according to my contract, this second book is due end of May, which really means May 20, because my agent wants to read it first and I want to have time to respond to her comments before we send it in. And I’m reminded of something the wonderful funny and prolific Donald Bain said during a panel at Malice. The panel wasn’t about deadlines or writing series, but as is often the case, the talk moved off topic and Bain ended up talking about writing a mystery before the age of computers. Basically, he was nearly ready to turn in his manuscript when he realized he’d goofed – a character’s husband had gone off to Egypt early in the book and never been mentioned again! Well, as Bain said, if this had happened post-word processor, it would’ve been easy to go back and re-work the missing husband back into the text. But Bain really didn’t want to have to retype the entire three-hundred-odd pages. So instead, on the last page, he has one character say to another, “I wonder what happened to Ahmed?”
Needless to say, the editor loved it – and assumed Bain had done it intentionally to set up a sequel.
I haven’t found anything like that in Grey Matters, but if you get to the end and someone asks, “I wonder what happened to Ahmed?” you’ll know why.